A story by Keith Croes
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The guy had guts, I'll say that for him (no pun intended). The shape he was in, it took a lot just to come in here. I showed him around that first night. It was the luck of the draw--my turn in the barrel. When he waddled behind me into the weight room, Bucky, the manager, walked by me and whispered, "Get the gross." But I already knew I had a sale. The guy had reached into his gym bag in the lobby and fished out our advertisement, the one that offered six months free on a two-year membership if you joined on your first visit, then asked, "Can you help me?" with a sort of funny accent. During the tour, he grimaced at the sight of some of the equipment. He had a real sense of humor.
He even worked out that first night, if you can call it that, strutting from the locker room into the weight room with an expression that said "I do this all the time," wearing brand-new, snowy-white gym shorts and a T-shirt the size of a car cover. I've always wondered where people like him get their clothes. He couldn't do one sit up, so I had him just kind of roll around, then ran him through some free weights using nothing over ten pounds. After a shower and blow dry, he sat in the office with a big grin on his ruddy face and paid cash. I remember because I didn't have to wait for his credit to clear before I could get my commission. His name was Franklin, Franklin Farley.
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When he first
arrived at the age of 21,
That summer he
joined a rowdy construction crew, got drunk on whisky for the first time and
took up smoking, but he had managed to wangle his way into the hotel and
restaurant management curriculum at
Living in the dorm
and eating three hearty meals a day, spending long hours studying with his new
roommate, Dwight, a wiry, high-metabolism type from upstate
"I'm pregnant," she said.
"What are you
going to do?" asked
"I'm going to keep it."
Intending to return
to school in the fall,
"Look, Jim, I
don't want to work construction through the winter,"
It was a Sunday in
late August, and it was the last time
The two found
themselves with a lot of spare time, and Jim began to get on
"How can you
eat cold baked beans?"
"I've been eating cold baked beans all my life, asshole. Get off my case."
But something about
it always bothered
In other ways the two were much alike. During times when things were slow, they both enjoyed "telethons," where they would stock up on beer and pot and junk food and lay around in their bathrobes and watch television for days at a time, never straying farther from the Sony Trinitron than the kitchen and bathroom.
When they were busted in March, agents from the Pennsylvania State Police and the Drug Enforcement Administration told them that theirs was the largest marijuana smuggling operation ever investigated in the history of the commonwealth. They hired a Philadelphia lawyer who would have taken payment in cocaine, had they had any, and lived off their profits until June, when the charges were dropped.
They were broke.
Jim went to work for a wholesaler in
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Frankie took to me right away, maybe because he could tell I enjoyed a challenge. When I look at customers, I don't just see "the gross," the bottom line, like Bucky always says. I see human beings trying to better themselves. I don't ignore them after they join, like some of the instructors. I determine their goals and put them through their programs, giving them as much help as they need. These are bankers, clergymen, lawyers, engineers, salesmen--and they're all the same to me. I don't even know what Frankie did for a living and I don't think I ever asked. A weight room is a great equalizer. In a roomful of men in their underwear, there's no class, no status, except one: fitness. And Frankie was in worse shape than anyone I'd ever met.
He adjusted his workout schedule to my work schedule, coming in Tuesday and Thursday evenings and Saturday afternoons, at least in the beginning. Right from the start he was religious about it, never missing a day. To tell the truth, if he hadn't been so determined, I'd have lost interest quickly because I find it hard to respect someone who has let himself go to that extent. But Frankie was different. It was as if he had gotten the body by accident and knew exactly what he had to do to get rid of it.
And I think he knew even before I told him. We sat in the instructors' office that first week and he explained his goal: to weigh 200 pounds by October of the following year. I found out he smoked and told him to quit. I gave him the literature on our pretty standard dietary plan. Then I recorded his measurements. He had a 52-inch chest and a 60-inch waist. And we had 14 months to lose 180 pounds.
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The Vietnam War was
winding toward its inglorious close when
Cindy, a lovely
blonde whose thoughts sometimes seemed to wander in circles, was devastated in
January when
A kind of home life
descended on Franklin and Cindy.
Dave and Franklin had worked in supply together for about a year when Dave leaned over his desk and nodded at a WAF named Sheryl, who was taking inventory down the long rows of shelves.
"She's hot," Dave said. "She wants you and me to come to her place over lunch. What do you say?"
Afterward, he felt rotten for weeks and avoided Dave and Sheryl as much as possible. It was another six months before they did it again, and he felt just as rotten the second time.
About six months
before
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A week after
"How would you guys like some entertainment?" she asked. "I'm a stripper."
"She's a stripper," said Dave.
"Pleasure to
meet you," said
They called their friend, Tony, who said to pick up some beer and bring her over.
Cindy nodded and
confessed her ongoing affair with Dave. She packed and left the next day, and
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A year later
"Why?" Kathy demanded through her tears.
"We were drunk."
"You...pig."
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By that time
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It took Frankie only a month to convince me that we actually had a chance. He worked like a maniac, huffing among the muscle-heads in the weight room like a glazed doughnut in a box of granola bars. I know he was working through a lot of pain at first, too, because that amount of blubber doesn't bounce around on your frame without tearing things up inside.
I remember telling him about the different medical and surgical treatments available for obesity, but he had a thing about doctors. He said he'd never been to one except for a physical he got when he entered the service, and that he'd never been x-rayed except for his teeth, and he wasn't about to go to a doctor now.
We took measurements once a week. After about three months I found out he was coming in for aerobics on my days off and had started jogging each morning. I got him to ease up every other day to allow his body to come back and put him on an amino acid-vitamin supplement. The man was insane. He was starving himself and he looked a little peaked there for awhile, but after four months the color returned to his face and in December he broke the 300-pound barrier. He brought me a Christmas present for that--a gold cigarette lighter. I found out later the thing's worth more than a thousand dollars.
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He had a knack for
making people feel at home, and the kitchen crew loved him. He wasn't above
pitching in during a crunch and his unique menu ideas, communicated in the most
diplomatic of terms, were credited to the head chef, who did little to make
anyone think otherwise. But his good work was noticed by those around
About a year after
he started at the Hyatt,
Sampling at the
restaurant, making glorious meals at home for Jill, with his belly hanging far
out over his belt and his breasts flabby against his rib cage,
But the filet
mignon was still as tender, the sauces as exquisite, the wines as heady, the
desserts as sweet. And the cigarette after dinner and after sex was just as
obligatory. And besides,
Financed by a
silent partner,
"Why?" he
asked, lighting a
"Look at you! You're a pig."
"I was heavy when I met you."
"And you're heavier now. You always said that you'd get back in shape. I can't stand it another minute."
Based on his
current income, Domestic Relations suggested that support payments should run
around $1400 a month, which was fine with Jill. And
Over the next three
years
What he lacked in physical attractiveness, he made up for in money, and he denied himself few pleasures.
When the call came,
as he knew it would,
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By April Frankie was coming in four times a week and weighed 250 pounds, which sounds like we were almost there, but those last 50 pounds I knew would be the toughest. I don't know what the October deadline was all about, but when Frankie said he had to lose the 50 pounds by October, he meant it. We had six months, period.
The thing is, Frankie was building muscle. He was six feet tall anyway, and a muscular six-footer is going to weigh 200 easy. I suggested he just stay on his diet and quit the workouts, but he wouldn't hear of it, said he wanted to reach 200 in the best shape of his life, that he was going to teach that filet mignon a thing or two. So I tried to wean him off the free weights and onto the Nautilus, which worked pretty good, though every now and then I'd catch him on the bench pumping up. The other guys were starting to look at him kind of funny. He was actually beginning to look like a human being.
Every now and then he'd say something strange. One time he was wrapped up in the ab machine, straining away, and I heard him say, "That goddamn Bloy-puss." And once he dropped a weight on his foot and hollered, "Fizz-butt." That's what it sounded like, "Fizz-butt." I guess it was his native language, whatever it is. I remember thinking he had an accent when he first started, but after awhile I could hardly hear it.
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The World
Headquarters of the Triamnian Earth Expedition was hidden off the furnace room
of the Baltimore Aquarium.
"Fizbut," Bloipus cursed, "this is the perfect place for you. You're a goddamn whale!"
"Look at you," he shouted. "Fifty of our best young men and women are sent to this planet to live among its inhabitants and this is what happens. How could you do this?"
"I've lived among its inhabitants. I have much to report."
"That's all we're supposed to do--report. You've consumed the entire planet! The scientists could slice you open like the Great Pyramid and find all sorts of archeological treasure. You might contain a 1959 Dodge complete with fuzzy dice. Fizbut!"
Bloipus paced behind his desk, his hand stroking his square jaw.
"Perhaps the
body they made for you was defective." He gave
Bloipus sat at the desk. "You let it all in. Well, now you're going to have to let it all out. There are weight restrictions, you know."
"Weight restrictions?"
Bloipus looked
pained. "Weren't you listening, Garboilus," he said, using
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The boys really started to watch Frankie about August. He'd come trotting into the club in his new body, smiling and joking, then whip through his program, benching 350, 400 pounds. I just couldn't keep him away from the free weights. I really think he could've competed if he'd kept it up. Definitely. At least in his age class.
He referred a lot of people here--some to me, but a whole lot of women, pretty girls, and even his ex-wife, who had to go to the women's side of the club. No commission for me, but I don't care. I guess he must've worked with the public. But I don't ask people what they do, just what they eat. And most people peter out after a while anyway. They come here a lot at first and then less and less until they disappear for good. Most people, anyway.
The end of September he weighed in at 210 and looked incredible. I remember he stood on the scale and smiled, and said something about how he could get away with it but wanted to reach 200. Right away I told him that he was looking good and that there was nothing magical about losing another 10 pounds, but he shook his head and said that the extra 10 were for good measure. The last time I saw him--the second week in October--that's what he weighed, 200.
We had sort of a party around here that night. He went through the Nautilus once, then sat around and talked with the guys in the weight room. He seemed sort of, I don't know, nostalgic. He never said a word about going away, but I guess we all kind of knew it. Anyway, we weren't surprised when he never came back. On his way out the door that night, he handed me $1000 in hundreds in an envelope.
I guess his disappearance is a real mystery. But I hear he took good care of his kids. At least that's what his ex-wife told one of the girls. She has a boy and there's another one someplace else.
It's a shame, though. He bought that two-year membership, but never got to use the free six months.
THE END
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keith@croes.com
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